I liked it. And yes, I felt the RSI effect on my hand. :p :)
Maybe you could have used music from NG. Using already famous soundtracks is a bit lame. (not even talking about the copyrights).
Short summery. Good but towards the end, maybe a bit to easy.
Anyway, Nice job of you.
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